Ten 1-Hour Episode Limited Series - Episode #5

 



SUMMARY

Dana's days are numbered as a Playboy Bunny. Back in the Lake Geneva area she rides her horse by the old Club J-Mar and imagines transforming the bar into the Sugar Shack. She was discouraged from buying the club, but after being fired as a Bunny, Dana went ahead, bought the bar and began to transform it. After being mentioned by Wally Phillips on his radio show opening night at the Sugar Shack was an initial success.




TEN 1-HOUR EPISODE LIMITED SERIES - EPISODE #5


Dana returns to work without any further incidents involving Richard.


          


           


          Dana returns to work without any further incidents involving

          Richard.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    Richard was not the only VIP to be

                    thrown out of the club. He was

                    supposed to be a dangerous man with

                    possible connections to organized

                    crime, but he never threatened or

                    bothered me again after that

                    incident. I continued working long

                    hours and making good money.

                    Eventually I was able to buy my

                    first brand new car, a white

                    Pontiac Bonneville convertible.

                    Back in Lake Geneva I fell in love

                    with and bought an expensive but

                    beautiful white Arabian Stallion,

                    and named him Cass.


          EXT. LAKE GENEVA COUNTRYSIDE - SOME MONTHS LATER


          Dana is riding Cass in the open Lake Geneva countryside,

          smartly dressed in white sharkskin hip-huggers and a low-cut

          top, Cass and Dana make an attractive couple.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    Together we rode through the serene

                    Lake Geneva countryside. One

                    afternoon, while riding just

                    outside of the city of Lake Geneva,

                    we passed by the old Club J-Mar.


          EXT. CLUB J-MAR


          Dana dismounts, ties up Cass, and meanders over to take a

          closer look at the old boarded-up building.


          She looks inside, after pulling aside a loose board, and

          imagines owning a renovated Club J-Mar; her very own

          nightclub.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    I dismounted, tied up Cass, and

                    walked over to the old boarded-up

                    building. The scene inside seemed

                    to be a moment from the past frozen

                    in time. Cobwebbed glasses were

                    still on tables with chairs

                    surrounding a dusty dance floor.

                    There were bottles on the backbar

                    still filled with liquor. I pushed

                    aside another board and forced my

                    way inside.


          INT. CLUB J-MAR


          Inside, Dana walks around dreaming of turning the old bar

          into her nightclub.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    Once inside I could see that a

                    party of some sort marked the last

                    night the old Club J-Mar was in

                    business. Everything was covered

                    with a thick untouched dusty-white

                    haze. The temperature was cool and

                    the atmosphere dreamlike. The

                    building and furniture seemed to be

                    in reasonably good condition. It

                    couldn't cost much to buy this old

                    building. Just then, the name for

                    MY club came to me on the tail of

                    an old memory.


          EXT. CHICAGO LOOP - PLANETARIUM (1960)


          Darryl and Dana are young lovers parked at the lakefront

          listening to the radio which was tuned to WLS.


                              DICK BIONDI (O.S.)

                    Dick Biondi here with one of the

                    hottest songs going, "Sugar Shack,"

                    by Jimmy Gilmore and the Fireballs.


          The song plays for a while.


                              DANA

                    What a great name for a nightclub!


                              DARRYL

                    What are you talking about?


                              DANA

                    Sugar Shack. That song we just

                    heard on the radio. It would make a

                    great name for a club. You know, a

                    cozy place where everybody could go

                    to spend a sweet night of fun and

                    frolic. The Sugar Shack. I love it!


          INT. CLUB J-MAR


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    I had the name and I had the

                    building. Before deciding to buy

                    the old Club J-Mar I wanted some

                    advice on what it would cost to fix

                    it up so I arranged for a local

                    carpenter to judge what it would

                    take to make the necessary

                    renovations.


          The next day the carpenter stops by to give his evaluation

          of the property.


                              DANA

                    So, what do you think?


                              CARPENTER

                    This place is a disaster. Every

                    joint is weak. You'd be crazy to

                    pay a single dollar for this

                    building. Now, you could tear it

                    down and start over, but that would

                    cost a small fortune.


                              DANA

                    Oh no . . . you can't be serious.


                              CARPENTER

                    I'm afraid so. I could use the

                    business but I'd hate to see you

                    throw good money after bad. Anyway,

                    you know where to reach me.


                              DANA

                    Thanks for coming out.


          Dana decides about buying the Club J-Mar.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    I brought some friends over to look

                    at the building. No one thought it

                    was a good idea to move ahead with

                    buying the building. I couldn't

                    shake the feeling that I was doing

                    the right thing despite the lack of

                    encouragement. I decided that if I

                    could get my husband to agree to

                    work with me I could make a go of

                    it. Although we had been estranged

                    for months, his mother told me

                    where I could find him.


          INT. DARRYL'S APARTMENT


          Darryl is shacked up with an old hooker and has been on a

          bender for days. He drags himself to the door to respond to

          Dana's repeated knocking.


                              DANA

                    Darryl, are you in there, it's

                    Dana. I want to talk to you.


                              DARRYL

                    What the hell are you doing here?


                              DANA

                    Get dressed, there's something we

                    need to discuss.


                              DARRYL

                    Listen, Dana, if it's about money .

                    . .


          Dana turns her back and waits outside the door for Darryl to

          get dressed. He


          opens the door and steps into the hallway.


                              DANA

                    Let's find a restaurant so we can

                    talk.


                              DARRYL

                    Let's find a bar so we can talk!


          INT. NEIGHBORHOOD BAR


          Dana and Darryl are sitting in a booth.


          Drinks are being served, Darryl's having a beer, Dana

          coffee.


                              DANA

                    Look, bygones are bygones. Let's

                    say we put everything behind us as

                    of today and start over. I found

                    this bar up in Lake Geneva and I

                    want to buy it. I believe we can

                    get our marriage back on track. If

                    you feel that way too, then come

                    with me and see the building--see

                    what you think. It needs renovating

                    but we could work on it together.

                    Just think, we'd have our own

                    business!


          Darryl pauses to quickly process Dana's proposal, then

          responds.


                              DARRYL

                    Well Dana . . . it might be worth a

                    try.


                              DANA

                    Alright. You go home and in a few

                    days I'll pick you up and we'll

                    drive to Lake Geneva.


          EXT. RURAL WISCONSIN ROAD


          Darryl and Dana drive up to the old Club J-Mar along Highway

          H just outside of Lake Geneva.


          Along the way they get into a number of personal issues

          festering under the surface.


                              DARRYL

                    So, I suppose you have your pick of

                    guys at the Playboy Club.


                              DANA

                    Well, being a Playboy Bunny does

                    mean something, Darryl.


                              DARRYL

                    I know that's true. About your

                    club, what are you going to name

                    it, again?


                              DANA

                    Don't you remember . . . that day

                    down by the lake front . . . we

                    were parked near the Planetarium

                    and listening to the radio . . .

                    that song came on, you know, "Sugar

                    Shack" and I told you I thought it

                    would make a great name for a

                    nightclub.


                              DARRYL

                    That's right . . . you did say

                    that, didn't you?


          EXT. CLUB J-MAR (1966)


          Dana and Darryl drive up to the old building.


          They get out of the car and approach, then enter the

          building.


          Darryl looks around and begins to share Dana's passion to

          realize her dream to own her own nightclub.


                              DARRYL

                    Do you really think it could work,

                    Dana? It would be quite an

                    adventure, wouldn't it . . . and

                    I'd be back with the kids. You know

                    I've always loved you . . .


          Dana cringes inside. So many nights she'd cried herself to

          sleep hoping to hear those words.


                              DANA

                    I've never stopped loving you

                    either, Darryl.


          Darryl agrees to help Dana with the club.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    With Darryl ready to give our

                    marriage another try and willing to

                    work with me to renovate the Club

                    J-Mar, I didn't hesitate to buy the

                    building. I kept working for

                    Playboy during the week. Darryl got

                    a job and even started visiting me

                    at the Playboy Club. We spent the

                    weekends in Lake Geneva getting our

                    Sugar Shack ready to open. We

                    shared our first real Christmas

                    together as a family with feelings

                    for each other. Darryl toasted in

                    the new year of 1966 with only one

                    glass of champagne. This was going

                    to be our year. Our family would

                    stay together, the Sugar Shack

                    would open, and I would continue to

                    supplement our income by working

                    for Playboy. That was the plan . .

                    . until disaster struck!


          INT. PLAYBOY CLUB (1967)


          Dana is back working a night shift after the holidays when

          Toni LeMay, the Bunny Mother, finds Dana, hands her a list,

          and gives her some nervous instructions.


                              TONI LEMAY

                    Dana, track down all the Bunnies on

                    this list and make sure they stay

                    late for an after-hours meeting.


                              DANA

                    What's this about? No one's going

                    to be happy about hanging around

                    after 4 A.M. unless it's something

                    important.


                              TONI LEMAY

                    Just be there . . . by the way

                    you're on the list too.


          Dana soon shows the list to another BUNNY on the list.


                              BUNNY

                    We're getting fired, aren't we?


                              DANA

                    Are you out of your mind? They

                    wouldn't fire fifteen of us at one

                    time . . . in the middle of the

                    night . . . would they?


          INT. PLAYBOY CLUB - MEETING ROOM


          Toni LeMay looks up at Dana from behind her desk--

          emotionless.


                              TONI LEMAY

                    It's over, Dana.


          Looking at the group.


                              TONI LEMAY

                         (continuing)

                    I can't save any of you. The

                    official reason is that all of you

                    are too old. We're going to have

                    only really young kids on the floor

                    from now on.


          Looking at Dana.


                              TONI LEMAY

                         (continuing)

                    This is not easy for me, especially

                    with you, Dana.


          The Bunnies are in shock and Dana is crying.


                              DANA

                    Will I ever be able to come back.


                              TONI LEMAY

                    No, I'm afraid not.


          Dana's anguish turns to rage.


                              DANA

                    This was deceitful and wrong--after

                    all we've done for Playboy. Toni,

                    mark my words, when this Playboy

                    Club no longer exists, Dana Montana

                    will be famous for a club that she

                    owns and operates!


          Dana and the other Bunnies are fired.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    We were upset and stunned as we

                    gathered our things and left the

                    Chicago Playboy Club for the last

                    time. The firings were big news. I

                    was interviewed for newspaper

                    articles and by Wally Phillips from

                    WGN Radio. My dream of opening the

                    Sugar Shack was set back, but not

                    shattered. I found another cocktail

                    waitress job in the Loop and

                    finally we were ready for opening

                    night.


          ACT III


          INT. SUGAR SHACK (1966)


          Dana, Darryl, and the staff are making final preparations

          for opening night.


          Down to their final penny, Darryl takes some returnable soda

          bottles back in order to buy cigarettes while Dana touches

          up the final coat of varnish on the bar.


                              DANA

                    Darryl, here's two more bottles.

                    Remember, get me a pack of Camels.


                              DARRYL

                    Alright, is there anything else we

                    need?


                              DANA

                    No, that I think we're ready . . .

                    ready as we'll ever be. I'm going

                    to check the varnish on the bar,

                    just to make sure it's dry.


                              DARRYL

                    Did you hear from Wally Phillips

                    yet?


                              DANA

                    No, but he owes me one after the

                    interview I gave him in January

                    over the Bunny firings.


                              DARRYL

                    Yeah, but that was news . . . this

                    is business.


                              DANA

                    I know, but I've got a feeling

                    he'll give us a plug.


                              DARRYL

                    Anyway, being Memorial Day weekend

                    there sure are a lot of Chicago

                    people in Lake Geneva celebrating.

                    A few of them might find their way

                    here if they heard about us on the

                    radio.


                              DANA

                    That's what I'm hoping.


          Four hours later it's time to open the doors to the Lake

          Geneva Sugar Shack.


                              DARRYL

                    Look outside, Dana, there must be

                    50 people already in line!


          Dana takes her position at the door, prepares to check ID's

          and take a modest cover fee.


          Everything is ready and the Sugar Shack opens its doors for

          the first time.


          One CUSTOMER recognizes Dana and speaks to her as he pays

          the cover.


                              CUSTOMER

                    So, you're Bunny Dana . . . yeah,

                    Wally Phillips said you were in

                    business for yourself and that we

                    should stop by.


                              DANA

                    Yep, that's me . . . former Bunny

                    Dana Montana. Well, I'm going to

                    have to thank Wally Phillips the

                    next time I talk to him.


                              CUSTOMER 2

                    Dana, what band will be playing

                    tonight?


                              DANA

                    Tom Thumb and the Three Fingers,

                    have you heard of them?


                              CUSTOMER 2

                    Sure have!


                              DANA

                    And to spice things up we've got a

                    couple of gorgeous GO-GO Girls.


          INT. INSIDE SUGAR SHACK


          Dana opens the club but struggles to make ends meet.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                    Our opening night was a success.

                    The band and the Go-Go Girls were a

                    hit. Darryl and I made a good team.

                    He managed the bar area and I

                    worked the crowd. He even had a

                    theatrical sense of humor that was

                    on display at the club. In the

                    weeks that followed our opening,

                    Darryl would don a Batman cape and

                    perform some dance antics on stage

                    whenever the band played the song,

                    "Batman." Throughout the rest of

                    the summer of 1966 business was

                    booming, the bills were paid, and

                    some money was banked, but not

                    enough to carry us through the lean

                    winter months. Lake Geneva was a

                    summer resort community and there

                    weren't enough local residents to

                    support most businesses during the

                    long winter months. When business

                    began to fade, so did Darryl,

                    taking a job in Chicago and

                    disappearing back into his bottle.

                    I took a job as a supermarket

                    checker, just to keep food on the

                    table. To compound our problems, I

                    became pregnant with our third

                    child during the better days over

                    the summer which further stretched

                    our meager resources. Somehow I

                    made it to spring and with the

                    opening of the 1967 tourist season

                    the Sugar Shack was back in

                    business once again. Rock bands

                    were packing them in over the

                    summer of '67. Lake Geneva always

                    attracted large numbers of tourists

                    over the Fourth of July, many of

                    whom were unruly college students

                    whipped into a frenzy by current

                    events creating social unrest

                    during the turbulent '60s. This was

                    the decade of President Kennedy's

                    election and assassination, the

                    Berlin Wall, Russian space

                    advances, the Civil Rights Movement

                    and the Cuban missile crisis, the

                    Freedom March on Washington,

                    bell-bottoms, the pill, smoking

                    pot, and burn-the-bra

                    demonstrations as as women became

                    more militant in seeking rights

                    that the men in our society took

                    for granted. The Civil Rights Act

                    of 1963 carried a woman's rights

                    rider. Marilyn Monroe is found dead

                    in 1962 and the President's

                    Commission makes public the needs

                    of women in American society. Betty

                    Friedan's best-selling book, The

                    Feminine Mystique, implanted the

                    possibility of equal-rights change

                    in the minds of millions of

                    American women. The Vietnam War had

                    escalated by 1967 and involved over

                    250,000 American soldiers as

                    combatants in the most unpopular

                    war in history. Demonstrations were

                    taking place all over the country.

                    The riots in Lake Geneva in the

                    summer of '67 were inspired by an

                    entire nation writhing from

                    political and social unrest. The

                    Sugar Shack was poised to ride the

                    crest of a tidal wave of cultural

                    transition to a new horizon of

                    entertainment that was destined to

                    make a strong social statement.


                              DANA (V.O.)

                         (continuing)

                    The bad press hurt tourism for the

                    rest of the summer. Business

                    suffered and by the time I closed

                    the Sugar Shack for the winter I

                    was down to my last dollar. It was

                    another scrape-by off season but

                    there was something to look forward

                    to. In the spring, Playboy was

                    planning to open a club and resort

                    complex in Lake Geneva. Every

                    business in the area, including the

                    Sugar Shack, stood to benefit. I

                    was intimately familiar with the

                    Playboy Club conventioneer

                    clientele that began dropping in to

                    visit the Sugar Shack. As expected,

                    they wanted more, or should I say

                    less, from our Go-Go Girl

                    entertainment. Under lots of

                    pressure, I agreed to let the

                    dancers go topless. Because of the

                    Playboy spin-off revenues I was

                    able to keep the Sugar Shack open

                    on a shortened weekend schedule

                    longer into the winter months, but

                    by March my finances were seriously

                    strained. I decided to seek a loan.


          INT. LAKE GENEVA BANK


          Dana is sloshing through the snow up to the bank's front

          door.


          She enters the warm building and believes that on the

          strength of her business and it's role in the community

          economy there is a good chance she will get a much-needed

          loan from the BANK LOAN OFFICER she'll have to deal with.


                              BANK LOAN OFFICER

                    Yes, Ms. Montana, what can I do for

                    you? Please, have a seat.


                              DANA

                    As you may know, I'm a customer at

                    your bank. I own and operate the

                    Sugar Shack nightclub just outside

                    of town.


                              BANK LOAN OFFICER

                    Yes, I'm aware of that.


          The loan officer rolls his eyes in a subtle gesture of

          judgmental disgust.


                              DANA

                    Well, I'm sure you're also aware

                    that any business operating in the

                    Lake Geneva area is hit hard during

                    the long winter off season.


                              BANK LOAN OFFICER

                    That is certainly true.


                              DANA

                    I've been in operation for two

                    years and I brought financial

                    statements to show you that the

                    business is sound based on summer

                    revenues.


                              BANK LOAN OFFICER

                    May I take a look at those.


          Dana hands them over.


                              DANA

                    This time of year my operating

                    budget reaches rock bottom. I'd

                    like to apply for a $3,500 loan for

                    a three to six-month period. I

                    should have no problem repaying the

                    loan by September.


          The loan officer just sits quietly, listening with a cold

          blank expression on his face.


                              BANK LOAN OFFICER

                    Miss Montana . . . I understand you

                    have three small children and you

                    are separated from your husband. I

                    think I've also been told that you

                    are presenting topless dancers in

                    your club. Miss Montana, I can

                    assure you that the board of

                    directors of this bank would take a

                    very dim view of my lending their

                    money out to someone like you. No .

                    . . no, Miss Montana, you are just

                    not the kind of person that we

                    consider a good risk. To be honest

                    , I just don't think you're going

                    to make it in our business

                    community.


          Dana is becoming visibly upset.


                              DANA

                    You don't understand. I'm good for

                    the money . . . and I really need

                    it badly. I just need your help for

                    a couple of months . . . please

                    help me.


                              BANK LOAN OFFICER

                    It's a closed issue. Under no

                    circumstances could I possibly

                    approve such a loan request.


          Dana becomes visibly angry.


                              DANA

                    Now, you listen to me. I've worked

                    hard all my life to make an honest

                    living and I won't be talked to

                    like some street bum. I am going to

                    make it in this town and when I do

                    you'll never see a penny of my

                    money at this bank . . . and it may

                    amount to millions . . . millions,

                    do you hear me!


          The loan officer is visibly shaken by Dana's outburst.


                              DANA

                         (continuing)

                    And, if I make enough money I'm

                    going to buy this bank just to fire

                    your ass, DO YOU HEAR ME!


          Dana stands up and pounds on his desk.


                              DANA

                         (continuing)

                    Furthermore, I'm closing all of my

                    accounts as of today.


          Dana turns to leave with tears streaming down her face.



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